You’re not rid of me
I’ll make you lick my injuries
I’m gonna twist your head off, see?
The narrative arc of the final season of the Showtime TV series Billions culminated in a horribly wrongheaded ending. (More on that later.)
The show had another fundamental flaw – namely, terrible scriptwriting.
For me, naturalistic dialogue is the sine qua non of a compelling television series. But the Billions writers seemed to be much more interested in demonstrating how clever they were rather than in writing dialogue that sounded believable when it came of the character’s mouths..
In particular, the scripts rely far too heavily on pop culture references. All the characters were constantly saying things like “I am not taking that particular boat trip up the Mekong to find Kurtz,” or “Yeah, it’s all more perplexing than the betrayal of Johnny Caspar,” or “And yet a slight Russell Ziskey smile dances around your face, Karl.”
There are literally dozens of such references to movies, TV shows, novels, recording artists, and athletes in the final Billions season.
I’m sure that the writers had a lot of fun coming up with those lines. I can just imagine sitting in the writers room, having a gay old time stumping my fellow wordsmiths with references to obscure sixties cartoon characters or Beatles songs or Coen Brother movies.
But I’m sorry – that’s not the way real people talk to each other.
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As I watched the final season of Billions, I was constantly hitting the pause button and going to Google because I didn’t know what the characters were talking about.
I’ll save you the trouble of Googling the references quoted above. The first one refers to the 1979 movie, Apocalypse Now – Colonel Kurtz was the Marlon Brando character. Johnny Caspar is one of the gangsters in the 1990 film, Miller’s Crossing. And Russell Ziskey is the character portrayed by the late Harold Ramis in the 1981 comedy, Stripes.
Bill Murray and Harold Ramis (as Russell Ziskey) in Stripes |
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The Billions writers seemed to have a particular affinity for The Sopranos.
Here are three references to that show from the final season of Billions:
If you were a Sopranos fan, you should understand what those references mean.
If you weren’t, get out that smartphone and start Googling!
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Rid of Me, which was P. J. Harvey’s second album, was described by SPIN magazine as “an expression of pure, unadulterated id” – which isn’t a bad description of Billions.
Here’s Polly Jean’s account of the writing of the title track from that album, which was featured on the soundtrack of episode six of the final season of Billions:
At that time, I very much wanted to write songs that shocked. When I was at art college, all I wanted to do was shock with my artwork. When I wrote “Rid of Me,” I shocked myself. I thought, “Well, if I’m shocked, other people might be shocked.” The sound of the words was powerful, and the rhythm felt clean and simple to roll off the tongue. I knew that this was the type of song I was trying to write.
Click here to listen to “Rid of Me.”
Click here to buy it from Amazon.